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Post by The End on Jul 21, 2008 19:35:35 GMT
I wrote and recorded a new song the other day - all critics welcome!! SEE BELOW!
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alexis
I'll Be On My Way
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Post by alexis on Jul 21, 2008 22:16:24 GMT
Very cool - I like it!! Catchy, foot tapping, good stuff!
I listened on a laptop speaker, so couldn't tell much about stereo separation or any bass of course. The only suggestion I might have is to somehow make the vocals crisper, not knowing the words ahead of time, I had a bit of a hard time figuring them out. Could be my laptop speakers letting me down there as well :-(
Congrats, great job, TheEnd !!
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Post by The End on Jul 22, 2008 18:19:22 GMT
Cheers for that! You're spot on about the vocals - absolutely no EQ on them in that mix.
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Post by The End on Jul 27, 2008 17:41:45 GMT
This is the finished version - still a bit rough in places, but that's me!!
[music]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/the.end3/GoingOut.mp3[/music]
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Post by Bobber on Aug 8, 2008 11:18:05 GMT
I like the change of chords going to the chorus. It needs a little more dynamics imho.
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Post by The End on Aug 9, 2008 9:42:36 GMT
It needs a little more dynamics imho. Vocally?
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Post by Bobber on Aug 9, 2008 20:56:18 GMT
No, in the complete song. It goes by a bit too easily.
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Post by The End on Aug 10, 2008 11:19:38 GMT
I was thinking of adding a choppy guitar - is that what you were thinking?
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Post by Bobber on Aug 10, 2008 18:56:18 GMT
Well, yes, something. But not everywhere.
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Post by The End on Aug 11, 2008 12:29:54 GMT
Fancy having a go?
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Post by Bobber on Aug 11, 2008 13:27:15 GMT
Mmm, yes. I'll have a look.
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Post by The End on Aug 11, 2008 17:25:52 GMT
Cool! The version I posted here is pitched up a couple of percent - so I can send you the slower version if that helps
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Post by Bobber on Aug 11, 2008 18:18:28 GMT
Yes, the original key would be nice.
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Post by Michelle Revolution on Oct 6, 2008 0:48:02 GMT
I'm just curious; was the guitar ever added?
By the way, the link is dead.
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Post by Bobber on Oct 6, 2008 9:21:08 GMT
I'm just curious; was the guitar ever added? By the way, the link is dead. Alan failed to send me the song...
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Post by The End on Oct 6, 2008 12:35:31 GMT
I'll sort it out!
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Post by Bobber on Oct 13, 2008 11:55:09 GMT
I'll sort it out! Still sorting?
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Post by The End on Oct 13, 2008 15:57:14 GMT
Yeah, sorry - I've been in Dublin this weekend!! Got a bit drunk!
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Post by The End on Oct 15, 2009 23:22:13 GMT
God, sorry, I really must sort that song out for you if you're still interested Bobber.
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